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Beep, Beep, Beep...

Writer: lavonnepaula
lavonnepaula
Mar 2, 2021
1 min read

It doesn’t matter why I was there, where the air is sterile and the sheets sting

It doesn’t matter that I was holding heavy water weights within the lids of my eyes

Doesn’t matter that I was yearning for you, or that your soul was trapped in a cage of endless torment

It doesn’t matter because, my sweet baby girl, you’re going to meet your father in the clouds soon


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Ashley Leach
Ashley Leach
Apr 26, 2021

This was a beautiful telling of watching someone you love go to paradise, having been in that room too many times for my liking. I love this.

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lavonnepaula
lavonnepaula
Apr 26, 2021
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Thank you! Loss produces an incredible emotion unmatched.

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Cristian Randeau
Cristian Randeau
Mar 11, 2021

I have written this response 3 times now. Each time a little different, never losing the feeling of heartache. The deep feelings and unique stories that I come up with to fill in the purposeful gaps feel too real. This is exquisite.

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lavonnepaula
lavonnepaula
Mar 11, 2021
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It's hard to explain the pain caused by loss, so I understand having to rewrite. Thank you.

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